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Scene(in the summer apartment of Johnny Kies in his kitchen with a big pot and a hatchet). Johnny: "olly guess what your arm isn't going to be alone tonight turns out a little pig made his way into the pot!" (A knock come from the door Johnny takes of the gloves and apron and was prepared for the door yet he saw it was his sister Mia and let her in; Mia enters the home) Mia :"Johnny I know it was you who killed Oliver now where is his arm?" Johnny chuckles ; Johnny : why his arm is being boiled with the little pigs hand for the lasagna surprise tonight ; do you want a plate?" Mia snorted "no you know I have take more to un identifies people Johnny ; you should too after you finish this feast it would cause you less trouble ". (Johnny puts back on his gloves and apron and goggles and started to pull the bones out of Oliver's arm and Detectives Marlo's hand) Johnny :" I do not care I always find ways to cover my tracks dad and pop pop did it so can I!" (Mia sits in the wooden chair in the kitchen) Mia :"true , yet they both lived in the woods we live in the city it's risker here ". (Johnny starts to boil the "meat") Johnny:"so I guess your not staying for lasagna surprise?" ( Mia starts to head for the door) " no dear brother I already had Chinese before I came over ; you do know other policemen will come in search of the "little pig", " (Johnny laughs " Johnny : who do you think I'm making this big batch of lasagna surprise for ?" Mia " I see well remember to cut thin so no fingers or toes will pop out and they figure out the surprise". Johnny:" yes I know Mia , I see you are leaving I'll save left overs I love you" ( Mia closing the door behind her) Mia " please do you know lasagna surprise is my favorite , I love you too Johnny".

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[C. Rose]

Scene(in the summer apartment of Johnny Kies in his kitchen with a big pot and a hatchet).
Johnny: "Olly guess what? Your arm isn't going to be alone tonight. Turns out a little pig made his way into the pot!"
(A knock come from the door Johnny takes of the gloves and apron and was prepared for the door yet he saw it was his sister Mia and let her in; Mia enters the home)
Mia: "Johnny I know it was you who killed Oliver. Now where is his arm?"
(Johnny chuckles)
Johnny: "Why his arm is being boiled with the little pig's hand for the lasagna surprise tonight; do you want a plate?"
(Mia snorted)
Mia: "No. You know it takes more to un-identify people Johnny; You should too after you finish this feast it would cause you less trouble ".
(Johnny puts back on his gloves and apron and goggles and started to pull the bones out of Oliver's arm and Detectives Marlo's hand)
Johnny: "I do not care. I always find ways to cover my tracks. Dad and Pop Pop did it. So can I!"
(Mia sits in the wooden chair in the kitchen)
Mia: "True, yet they both lived in the woods. We live in the city. It's risker here".
(Johnny starts to boil the "meat")
Johnny: "So I guess you're not staying for lasagna surprise?"
(Mia starts to head for the door)
Mia: "No dear brother I already had Chinese before I came over; you do know other policemen will come in search of the 'little pig', "
(Johnny laughs)
Johnny: "Who do you think I'm making this big batch of lasagna surprise for?"
Mia: "I see. Well remember to cut it thin so no fingers or toes will pop out and they figure out the surprise".
Johnny: "Yes I know Mia. I see you are leaving. I'll save left overs. I love you"
(Mia closing the door behind her)
Mia: "Please. You know lasagna surprise is my favorite. I love you too Johnny".


"No. You know I have takes more to un identifes people Johnny; You should too after you finish this feast it would cause you less trouble ". - This lines confuses me. What should Johnny do that Mia already does? "have takes more to un identifies"? Maybe there is a typo in there somewhere...

Nice twist. I'll keep reading when it's ready.

[Kamari's]

Identifies is a slang term I thought of for homeless people or orphans and street workers she takes people who are not missed or easily identified

[Writer *78*]

Do exactly what is scene here.

[Kamari's]

In a summer apartment

[Writer *78*]

Space it out like the person who reviewed it.