The wrong

I know I said there was to be only four but I had to say this

The wrong

in this world is not caused by nature it is taught.

Why hate a color,a religion, a type of love, or a gender

as long as a person is good and thier morals and values are in the

right place who are we to judge.

You may be gay, straight, black, white, buuddist or whatever

you maybe as long as you take care of your business and work as an able person

then why should I care.

The wrong is that some jobs pay better to men than woman

rapist and murders get a lighter sentence than a tax fraud 

athletes get payed more than our men and women in arms who fight and die to

keep us safe.

Why are we fighting and attacking one another when

we could come together and solve bigger matters 

to stop murders and rapist to fix the damage that we have done to the earth.

The wrong is that we started the pointless hate and violence

the right is to stop and fix it  and fix the other messes we caused.

That should be our goal because you and I have the same

blood and air that lets us live for today.

Why fight when we could be fixing the wrong that I and my fellow humans

caused.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

At times there is not much to say when I read your writings Kamari other then feel the reflex of my head going up and down as I scan through lines at time because of its unconcious quality I only realize when I see my vague reflection on the screen looking like on of them dogs that people put on the dashboard of their cars. But I can tell you not only did you make me do that silly involuntary movement I find your honesty, directness and fearless attitude very attractive in the context of the writing I am sure that applies to you in real life but that is a "different kettle of fish" (before I start to blush here).

To the point.

Thankyou

[Kamari's]

Uhh I like your stuff because it's a lot more sophisticated and I like breaking it down thank you for the review your takes on it always interest me .

[Bhumika Devkota]

I very so much agree, great poem

[Kamari's]

Thank you :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I guess it should be #their and #buddhist.. inspite of that it is really an inspiring poem.to stand against the evils of the society...

~Sophy

[Kamari's]

Thank you I just see the pointlessness

[Sophy Freebirds]

You're pretty welcome..

[Kamari's]

:) I welcome the comment

[Avinash]

This sounds like an anthem for humanity. But like brightness ,darkness is also there. Similarly it goes for human beings as well. There are good and bad people and the struggle makes this world go in a cycle. We have to choose our sides according to our true nature and fight for goodness. Inside ourselves as well as outside.

[Kamari's]

Well avinash it is up to the young to fix it yet they learn from us and mimic what they see so instead of progress we only see a loop

[priya]

All men are alike in lower natures: it is the in their higher characters that they are different. Sometimes we behave like stupid fickle beings that they start finding stains in others when the stain no where but on themselves. The wrong does happen on us but by us. Good work Kamari.

[Kamari's]

Thank you so much