Why ?

I have written poetry on options , emotion , and inner secrets yet I thought maybe this one could just be for thought.

Why have you called upon me?

Why do you want my attention and why do I want yours?

Why do you lust for me only on your terms?

Why do you hide what you feel for me when we both know the truth?

I know I'm not the prettiest, the smartest, or even the nicest young woman but do I not deserve to have an opinion in this cat and mouse game ?

I believe I do so I demand the truth quit saying you only wanted to come by and say hello and whine to me for untold minutes quit joking about wanting me I am growing tired of games old friend you know me and I know you , we have been acquainted with each other why not be truthful.

Why do you only seek me when you need something or want to talk about things but do not ask if I need you ?

Can you please just answer this so I can go about my life I mean I am not going to get any younger and neither are you so why insist on being a "friend" when you could just be honest on what you want from me.

Reviews

[Luissanto]

Wow, what a powerful piece. So full of passion and so well written.
Each word carefully chosen to invoke such emotion.
Thank You for sharing such intimate thoughts...

[Kamari's]

Thank you I wrote it as I was in thought

[Edward Lancheister]

regardless the grammar or some "missing" place words, i could get the message behind the lines.
not romance just take and give that could relate much more deeper than a romance or something equally balance of need. common complicated moment to be a romance but an excelent symbiotic mutualism between person as long isn't going to be a parasitism

thanks for share, keep writing :)

[Kamari's]

Exactly!! Thanks for the review :)

[Rene Salinas]

Kamari I am not sure with the "are" in line four is intentional. I enjoyed the tinge of irritability contained here. It shows that dynamic of becoming the used by somone that thinks that relationships are but a a game. I like the rehtorical questions too as they express an inner conversation of sorts. I for once be the last person to comment on how you want to present your poetry as I pledge allegiance to no rules but it does make me wonder, Why did you choose that particular lay out ?

Just curious though.

Thankyou

[Kamari's]

Well you see I have this friend of mine who I am there for anyways long story short he frustrates me along with some other male friends I have so I did it this way to make it seem like I am finally confronting all of them which one day I soon hope too . The are is accidental I'll correct it

[Kamari's]

Thanks for the review