I Am

I am like an ocean that holds a mystery. My feelings and emotions roll with the tides. When I am angry, my waves are destructive like those in a storm. When I am sad, my waves are calm like those on a quiet night. When I am happy, my waves are playful like those of a summer day. I am like the ocean that waits for that perfect something...that perfect someone...who is willing to enter my world...be a part of my life...of my waves....

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Very nice poem comparing yourself to an ocean...

But just so you know, it's 'a part' not 'apart'.