Vision Impaired

This poem is about the disasters of driving drunk.

Vision Impaired

My sight is blocked by a translucent sheer  

So far gone, I feel no fear

My speech is slurred as I say goodbye

I never knew this is how I would die

I got into the car thinking I was fine

But then I missed the stop sign

The aftermath was impossible to mend

My impaired judgment was the end

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

Strong Message. Drunk driving is no joke!

Thanks for sharing..
maria

[Nightfeather]

The message that this poem is one that must be reminded by everyone, for driving under influence has cost the life of many and emitted sadness by the ones that has lost their loved ones. The tears that flow are not supposed to flow, for we only have to embed this message by the people. So they may drive safe and the sadness will fade from this world. This poem is a small step for the disasters but a great step for mankind

Good job :D