Unnoticed

Just an angsty poem I wrote a long time ago, it's always been one of my faves I've written, so i figured I'd post it here.

Unnoticed

She sits alone,
at the back of the row,
plotting her plan,
but nobody knows.

She fakes a smile,
so they can see,
she pretends she is happy.

Tears escape and rumors spread,
she's not here,
she's declared dead.

Her plan worked,
she stopped the pain,
stopped the hurt.

They were astonished,
never thought she would do this.
They didn't see.

Time passes,
they forget,
the girl that's not here,
the girl they miss.

He sits alone,
at the back of the row,
plotting his plan,
but nobody ever knows.

They're the forgotten ones.

 

Author's Note

I think I was about 16 or 17 when I wrote this, so it's been a while, but I'd love to know what you think of it, thank you.

Reviews

[a.Rory]

Mooi! En het doet me denken aan een stuk dat ik zelf schreef toen ik 16 was. "No longer No more" ... lees t maar es, dan snap je wat ik bedoel. :')
Keep writing!