A reason to scream

You laid the room
Just the way
I would of laid it myself
you held on tight
No one heard the sound of you leaving
Until it was too late
Whispers told of a life cut short
But no one really knew the truth
Blood runs deep in hearts full of pain
Glass is so transparent
A bit like men with no reson to lie
But still they do
The drugs take over in the end
Or is it mindless delusion
Whatever it was
Whatever the reason
Its so silent now your not
around  
Can you hear this pin drop
shh
Listen carefully
To the beating of our hearts
You may find the reason
Why you should of screamed for help

Reviews

[fargone]

deep words indeed, pebbles. sad tho, curiously defiant in some way? maybe it's me. either way, its a brilliant write.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! Awesome Pebbles!

[Lily Mae]

This happens far to often.. you penned the events and emotions of it perfectly ... Great write Peb's... xxx

[Judy Ponceby]

So tragic....beautifully expressed.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Deep and emotional my friend.