Heaven's bind

As your beauty excapes
from the recesses of your soul
I sit and listen quietly
contemplating
How on earth your mind came to be so beautiful
Within the frame of life
You touch upon moments
that few even bother to dwell upon
Sinking so low
Rising so high
Leading us in a celebration of our lives
One day when life is done
And it is time to return to the fold
God will open his gate and bow
before the poets
for they are his true messangers
They are the golden thread which binds this earth to heaven

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I love the magical feel in this. The golden threads binding us between heaven and earth..how beautiful..xx

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Excellent my friend.

[Joel M Frye]

And the paradox of it all is that most go through Hell on their way and in their own ways to create the golden threads. A tip o' the forelock to you for this one, Pebbles.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely beautiful Pebbles.........They are the golden thread which binds this earth to heaven.......:)

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[Coyote Poetry]

You create a beautiful vision with your words. Heaven would be a good place if people could talk and enjoy the voices of music, poetry and be content. The story was written with a hopeful pen. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote