Cold

Can you feel the coldness
which freezes moments
Which holds me closer
Than I am comfortable
Moments that seem to
Penetrate and Permeate my soul
You thought you could leave
Unwilling to move the tide
Ride the wave
Or wait for the clouds to clear
I left still waiting
Willing for you to return
Like a ghost in the harbour
Your presence sings sweetly
Of yesterdays pain

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Pain penned here so well...............

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[Joel M Frye]

You have reminded me of many frozen moments in my own life, Pebbles, icicles falling from roofs to impale me where I stood. Powerful images here, and well done.

[roy mccarthy]

lovely poem pebbles,sad,but very well written!

[Lily Mae]

This has such a feel of sadness to me... Beautifully written piece Pebs.. I can see her standing there looking out and wondering why.. xx