Hold me under

Hold me under water
Until i loose the fight
Then lift me to the heavens
Because this cant last the night

Hold on now
Switch it around
Pull the plug
That gurgling sound

Going under
Unable to breath
Hold me now
Please dont squeeze

Push me back
From the edge of the cliff
Hold my hair
Dont release your grip

Hide my face
See me smile
Ive no where to hide
Hold me a while

Reviews

[Joel M Frye]

At least Naked Poetry didn't join with my old performance poetry troupe...Full Contact Poetry. And yes, Pebbs and Lily...I will spare you the reality of that image as well. ;)

[Lily Mae]

I saw that this weekend on a show and they were calling their poetry naked poetry..I just laughed.. and no my dear I would spare you that and the horrific pictures that would come with it lol..xx

[Pebbles]

Well at least u didnt ask me if i had been peeking whilst u were havin a bath lol .... diary umm after finding out u been reading naked poetry (what ever that is - are u sure its not just reading poetry whilst wearing no clothes ?) i think i should stay out of your diary lol !! Thanks Lily x

[Lily Mae]

I love the way it balances back and forth.. We're you peeking into my diary? lol.. Awesome write Peb's...x