Silence and coffee

Silence is the smoothness
Between
Not knowing what to say
And not wanting to bring it up to the surface 
 
It says more than needs to be said
I will sit in silence
And drink your coffee
If you will only but pour me a cup

I savour the moment
 And breath deeply

There is no where
Better to run than into
The circle
Which runs around the brim of your cup

Reviews

[Art Sun]

nice thoughts within this poem...like an addition savoring coffee and the closeness of another...such silence is divine...

[Coyote Poetry]

I like a quiet morning with coffee. Sometime too many words allow things to get to be too hard. Better to have a pleasure conversation and enjoy the peace and quiet of a morning. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Pebbles, I cannot begin to tell you what this first stanza spoke to me but it touched my life deeply in the place where I am right now. Thank for this one.......

[Pebbles]

Oh Richie ! u want PG tips i've got them ... just i don't drink the stuff myself am a coffee fan myself - thanks guys xx

[Gone]

wooh I'd join you but I only drink PG Tips, the undercurrant of this poem belies the surface

[Lily Mae]

I agree with Joel. To me it feels like a masterpiece for thought.. The things that brew in our minds and come to surface at the brim of the cup.. I love it..x

[Joel M Frye]

So much brewing beneath the surface, Pebbles. (sorry) You have crammed so much between the lines, I don't think I can cover it all here. Well, well done, good woman.