Moment

In this next moment
I will think
Of all the reasons
All the desires
All the bloody minded
Moments
That came before this one
And then
I will try harder to make
This moment
Just a little more
Fluent
A little smoother on the soul
A moment of complete surrender
Amoment of letting go
God its so good to breathe again
The solitary tear
That is running down my cheek
Is representative of my desire to be
My desire to know
And my desire to want more  

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

Im not sure how to describe the feeling.. so Ill simply say that I loved this poem.. Its freeness of speech and clarity in feeling is engaging.

[Joel M Frye]

I will try harder to make this moment just a little more fluent...a little smoother on the soul. What a beautiful goal for which to strive, Pebbs. Thank you for the meditative gift...I shall carry that Pebble in my pocket with my other touchstones now.

[Lily Mae]

Amazing Pebs..you had me wanting more for myself by the end.. Beautifully written..xx

[Richielee]

yes it is good to breathe, in between scoffng chocolate cake of course! lol nice one pebs!