I Want You Back

Another poem I made, enjoy

I want to keep you and you want to keep me too
It’s raining from my eyes, the sadness I'm going through
Why, oh why can’t we be in our company together any longer

Reviews

[Aura]

This is interesting. To me, this sounds like a relationship that is on the brink of ending. Both of them still wants the other person but maybe it was not working out?

[Lilac Lilies]

Thank you for reviewing the poem! I really appreciate people enjoying and even reviewing my work, knowing people like my work makes me happy

[Aura]

It was my pleasure!