My Dream Paradise

Quiet rushing of water on sand,

The gentle breeze in the trees,

Distant laughter of children,

my children,

The children I wish for.

The hand of the one I love,

the one who haunts my dreams.

My paridise where all my dreams come true.

Maybe in the future it will hold

all that I want so much.

But it is not real,

for the sound of my alarm,

brings me to reality.

Maybe one day,

I'll never want to go to sleep,

because reality,

is better then my dreams.

Maybe...

 

 

Reviews

[All faded blue]

Maybe one day I'll never want to go to sleep, because reality is better than my dreams, maybe. My favorite line! Beautiful write.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Pepper,

This is a wonderful, simple, and straightforward poem. The message is direct and clearly delivered. Your reader can feel what you feel and see your dreams. Nicely done.

Best regards,

Rick

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very well done... such tranquil thoughts of a better world... I know I would love it if my life out shined my dreams, coarse then I wouldn't want to sleep.

[J.Black]

"Quiet rushing of water on sand,

The gentle breeze in the trees,

Distant laughter of children,

my children,

The children I wish for."

Aw, that's so cute! This is deep, emotional and very thoughtful. If you dream hard enough, it will be a reality with a little bit of work. ;-)

[~Mary Ann~]

This piece reaches out to me on a personal level... a thoughtful piece.. and a hopeful one.
i will be saving this piece into my favorites library as it reflects so many feelings I have felt at one point of time or another...

A free flow of thought is my impression of this piece.. the picture chosen complements the piece.
"A path of dreams"...