Biological

You left so suddenly.

I thought you were 

coming back,

I was so alone. 

Months passed and 

you were still gone, 

I thought it was

my fault.

That I had done something

wrong,

to push away your love.

I started to look 

for that love 

in other men. 

Turns out their love

isn't sweet like honey,

but burns like whiskey. 

Now look what you've done

to me. 

Reviews

[Ghania]

This is really touching!
Some relations do ruin us in a way like that.
BTW, a good read. :))

[k.s.]

Thank you so much! I'm glad my writing made you feel touched :)

[Ghania]

You're Welcome Katy. :)

[M.E.Lyle]

Wow, a triple whammy.
Falling in love: getting dumped: and then ruining your future life with other men.
This guy really got to you.
So, how do you feel about that?
Ask yourself this question, who's in charge of your life, you or him.
A nice expression of your emotions. Nicely written and easy to read.

[k.s.]

Actually I wrote this about my biological father leaving me when I was younger but I wrote it in a sense where more people could connect with it. I get what you're saying and I'm definitely in charge of my life. Thank you for your kind words.

[M.E.Lyle]

Aha, it all makes sense. Thanks for the insight.