Unspoken Care

Caressing touches, eloquent eyes,

Speaking of love that circumstance defies.

A simple touch that makes the heart race;

The smile that's born at the sight of your face.

Fingers intertwined and holding tight;

Emotions that spiral to dizzying heights.

A look that holds such unspoken care

For the heart that completes the perfect pair.

The sigh that escapes and betrays despair

For the secret feelings that these hearts share.

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Great write....deep emotional feel to this piece....
I like the flow and rhyme of this poem too..
and the final line is great..."For the secret feelings that these hearts share.."

[R J Askew]

Ach, you are well and truly loved up methinks! Long may it last! 'A simple touch...' is the best touch for me as that is exactly how it is and all we need.