Lets Not Walk In Our Glass Slippers, We Might Just Shatter Our Feet

Your so delicate, that you can't handle reality.

How do you live such a fragil life?

When the rope your tying gets to tight,

When we were walking

In the sand,

I can still see that rope in your hand...

And it makes me love you.

I love you because theres nothing left.

I lost you

Its so true.

Don't ask me why.

I dont need a reason to live

Just let me die.

"Lets give up, because we can't hang on."

That's what you said, and now your gone.

Why didnt they try?

All we do is lie.

They pulled the trigger ,while she held the gun.

Yeah you were a great friend.

I hope you had fun.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

I like the new version!!!!!

[Bee]

Very vivid imagery. Haunting ending. "I hope you had fun" --> This had a mocking, teasing edge to it. Very candid, but check your spelling though. :P
Keep it up. :)

[DannyLynne Riley]

in a word stunning...very very well done this piece i would definately chose to add to my own personal library...i look forward to reading more from you...keep writing

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw, yeah, this was definitely a sad one :( Yeah, my heart has been broken many times, that's for sure, heh. Amazing piece, and i can totally relate to it. Great poem!

M.

[Sweets]

I loved this poem.
Great job ! :D