Peace

Look to the sky,

What do you see?

Do you see a wave of beauty and light,

Full of peace and not of fright?

Now lay on the ground,

And what do you feel?

Do you feel the soft dirt trace around you're skin,

Showing you all it's true nature within?

Now take a deep breath,

And let in the rest.

To sleep with a peace,

Beyond you're belief. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Boldpen]

very calm piece.
Only reading makes mind wrap into peace.
Nice job and brilliant choice of words and expressions.
Loved IT!
wonderfully done.

[Chris]

Soft and quiet words...

Chris

[Linear]

Good and tranquil thoughts permeate through your poem, it needs no editing excellent :0)

[Seashell]

one needs peace within to sleep at all..you describe a natural peace and it seems heavenly..
well done
Babs x