Love you for a while...

Where does love end?

In the depths of night I waited for you.

In the wake of morning I held on for you.

In the dawn of my sunrise I cried for you.

In the midst of my sunset I stayed for you.

In the life of day I missed you.

Everyday I loved you.

Every time you left, I stayed...

waiting,

crying,

smiling,

living,

dying,

standing.

Everywhere you were, I wasn't and even then,

I remained.

When you walked away, I always stayed close behind.

Once you said those three words I'd waited a lifetime to hear,

I already loved you.

And even when you reversed those very words

to tell me the only thing that could break me to dust,

I still loved you.

I loved you then,

I'll  love you tomorrow, next year

and I love you now...

Even if you don't

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow! An amazing write! This was really deep, and held a lot of passion and emotion. I thought that the listing was effective, and I felt that through doing that, you built up the tension, making this a really captivating write. I could relate to this poem so much, and I loved the way you worded the ending. A beautiful piece. :)
~PaperHearts

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Can someone come read this to me every night? As a bedtime story? I love this one, it is really felt and passionate. I can easily relate to this poem, I know how it feels. It's like, a story translated to an effective and meaningful poem, with a quick pace and heart-felt emotions. Nice write =) Looking forward to reading more of your writings!

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