0230 Wake-up Call

This is SUPER rough. I've just been going through a lot recently and it helps to get it out there. Its broken and not very rhythmic but it feels good to get it into some form.

I don't understand

The way your mind works.

At 2:30 am you want to marry me,

by 10 you'd think it had never happened.

Its like you finally decided to trust,

but then you change your mind.

I don't think you understand, 

how much I actually care;

don't take me for granted,

'Cause I won't be around long. 

Who am I kidding,

I'm at your beck and call

The way your mind works baffles me.

Author's Note

I haven't written in a long long time. It's been almost 8 years since the last time I tried my hand at poetry. Its gonna be rough.. haha

Reviews

[richieb]

Rachel,
Your words do not bear as much rust as you believe. I enjoyed your poem and respect your writing. Break up and pain in your heart can be quite burdening. Your words were honest and portrayed your feelings. Most of humans have been in your shoes at some capacity. I felt your words. Keep writing.
Love and Peace,
Richie b.

[Wórdsmíth]

Well.. 8 years? That`s a very long period of time a pen visited to your hands.

In today`s world, most of the people`re hidden behind the love, they don`t even know what they want from it. If there`s true love, then nobody should take much time to think o`er it ..`bout to live along. Because, if you take some time to manipulate your mind with heart & the heart by mind then, there`s something wrong..not with you but with your thoughts (which are the zone of your maze). In other words, "true love`s already at out feet, only an eye needs to be perceived through winds." Nice imagery.