Judge, Jury and Executioner

Judge, Jury and Executioner

A Poem by Christine

How can you sit there, judging everything that passes infront of you?

How can you be so critical of things you know nothing about?

You say you just are speaking your mind, but I think you just need to attack someone.

You say you spare us from what you truely think, yet the venomous things that you utter still break us like glass.

What is your problem?

Is nothing okay to you?

Can nothing be left alone, free from your judging eyes?

Of course it can't.

You won't let it.

You think everything you say is to better the world around you.

Even though the slanders are obviously hurting everyone else.

Maybe you think highly of yourself, but how could I know?

I don't know that much about you,

I don't know your past, I don't know how your mind works.

But I do know that the words that you try to fix me with are just trying to change me.

The words that you intend to repair someone with just break it down even more.

If i'm not willing to change, I won't.

So stop trying to force it on me, stop trying to force it on everyone else.

I'm here to protect the people I love.

And you sure aren't making it easy.

Even though you think your "suggestions" are vague enough,

Are general enough to effect more than one person,

It hurts who you are aiming at most of all.

We all know who you mean when you say your snide comments.

So just stop.

Stop trying to change the world.

And don't try to fix something that isn't broken.

What is the point in that?

© 2010 Christine


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I think everyone knows someone like this.
Well done. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


excellent, this is very well written and uses great emotion. I don't see any spelling or grammar errors...so kudos :] I agree, I think I know who you're talking about, and everyone who knows, can most definitely agree with what you just wrote. But I guess the only chance of justice we have in that whole situation, is that eventually, this person will get what they deserve. They will reach a point where literally NO ONE is going to even tolerate being with someone who feeds off of other peoples 'misery' to make themselves feel better. It's very childish, but I don't think its something this person will ever overcome.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i love that word snide you used right up there. ^^
ha :D

very wellw written, i belive i know who this is about and
I think you wrote it in view of everyone, and not just youself.
Very great quote at the end, keep up the work girl.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2010
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Christine
Christine

Kenosha, WI



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I know my writing sure won't be as good as all the stuff on here, but I'm tired of keeping all this bottled up. This will be my release. Now I will try to keep everything I write about completely anon.. more..