Flutterbye

Up on the rooftops, caving in.

If im not in my house,
it doesn't mean im not at home.

If im not surrounded by people,
don't just expect that im alone.

If i am not smiling,
It does not mean that i am sad.

If i am dying,
that means that i am glad.

If you can't see me,
do not assume i am not there.

For if you all look closely,
i am dancing in the air.

Author's Note

Love to know what you think.

Reviews

[Neville]

I think this has promise, lots of promise and it reminds me of the words I once discovered written on a Kleenex left next to the stereo at a party in 1978....In effect eternally dated... nice

[Luna Zerimar]

This is beautiful.

I can feel pain. I can feel the loneliness.

It jumps in my stomach when I read this.

[A. Amos]

You have one deep and old soul, one can feel from your writing!

Keep writing my friend, this was brilliant!

[Jackson H. Harley]

Wish I could say more but I'm not great with reviews: I loved this piece, short but full of interesting and thought provoking lines, thanks for sharing :)