Life

Haha im really ill

When I think of life I sometimes think of cold hard steel,
or ten thousand lashes to the back?
Sometimes its like being ripped apart by horses,
or a violent elephant attack!

Author's Note

I am ill

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Ahhh hoping you are feeling better now....but what a great write! Anyone who has lived awhile can relate to your words so eloquently stated with passion and despair. Nicely done.

[Gee]

Do you ever see it through rose tinted specs,(I think I already know the answer to that!!)Enjoyed the wee write

[Dez H.]

Damn I like this, it's short to the point and is like a whole page in 32 words. I'm looking forward to reading more of your s**t. P.S And ur cute.
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[Neville]

I like 'Life' I like the way you fling words together... They read well and I hope you get better soon....

[W R Stowe]

Life is what we make it out to be there will always be ups and downs search within for your answer