The Ocean

The cold

damp

sandy shore.

The icy

water

numbing your feet.

The Earth

beneath 

crumbling.

The

whoosh

of the waves.

It

is calling

out to you.

“Come in closer.

You need me.”

Craving tears,

you invite

the ocean

in.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

When I read this poem I felt as if standing alone on an ocean shore. Looking horizon deep. You have poured emotions so powerful in this poem. Good one

[James Mckay]

beautiful...it's been so long since the ocean sand was felt between my toes. I live 3 hours away from the ocean...I read it and it felt like I could feel it.

[Pete]

very deep and emotive. i could feel it as i read ... :)