New Beginning

New Beginning

The sun has set on the past,
and will rise, beginning a new future.

I hoped for this day to come.
I kept my promise.
I just hope i can do things
right this time..

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Loved how you maintained the positive attitude and turned it to such a beutiful poem which gives us the hope that things will eventually become alright..

Also loved how you expressed the fear and desperation of trying to not break a promise anymore like how it had been .. The hope in this poem is really expressed through you brilliantly framed lines!

Hope to read more of your works in the near future! Keep writing !

[Brittany Bostic]

Sometimes we have to look forward even if we want to hold onto the past. I like the simple statement this poem gets across

[Inject Positivity]

Absolute truth....Every day is a new beginning, the past mistakes are gone....We have to make sure we focus on our today's work cause its another chance....Wonderful reminder my frnd....Lovely message....Full ratings.....