Time

I wrote this on my first day after being moved up to full time at my job. I swear the day was never going to end. I've been working full time for almost a year now and it's not as bad anymore.

Tic, Tok, Tic, Tok,

Minute hand drifting apart,

Second hand steady as ever,

What a simple little endeavor.

Watching the clock tic by

the hour.

A feeling inside, a taste quite

sour.

Waiting and waiting

for the day to end,

Unfortunatly it just began.

Tic, Tok, Tic, Tok.

Eyes constantly on the clock.

Tic, Tok, Tic, Tok.

Just another bird in the flock.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I can relate to the feelings behind it....When i was a kid i used to watch the clock waiting for the study time to pass so that i could go out of my house and play.....Very thought provoking for me.....Full ratings...
Note: there is a printing mistake in the word 'minuet' which could be 'minute' i think.....

[KLH]

Yes, thank you for spell check. Sometimes my fingers type faster than my brain can think ^^

[Inject Positivity]

That happens, but the main thing is to write it down at first because that thought might not come again.....You are welcome....

[KLH]

Oh i know, i carry a small writing book around in my purse for those sudden sparks of insperation. Sometimes my brain just ignores spelling.

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! That is great....I think we can correct the spelling or grammartical mistakes anytime but the important part is to write it at first and you are intelligent in keeping a notebook along with you....I use to do that too, it helps in writing with so many thoughts.....