Together

Sorry, just needed to get some feelings out. Odd though, this wasn't what i was feeling. But it made me feel better and thats all that matters.

Dying at heart am I

Filling with sadness to the brim

Shuddering sobs raking through my body

Shaping my life

My dreams

But never my hopes

Someday all will be fine

Never again will a tear fall

Happiness will be life

And laughter will fill my head

But yet is to come

For those hopes never die

Though all else does

They live on forever

When they will happen is not known

But someday

 Someday, you watch

When I am long gone

Those hopes will be fulfilled

And for once the world will live on

In perfect harmony

Together.

 

Author's Note

You don't have to review but i am interested in how you think it turned out.

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Hm... it's nice. As I can feel the emotions. But for some reason it strikes me as odd. Ha, but a lot of things do that to me, so it's not really saying anything... Hm... I can't put my finger on it, but it seems off. But other then that, it's fine! Great actually. *smiles and chuckles* then again, I'm not a poet, do my opinion might not mean anything....