Mom

Do you think she will like it? Please, i really need this to mean something to her. If it isn't good, i don't want to give it to her.

The things you do,

The songs you sing,

"I love you."

Is what they ring.

 

It's in your motions,

And in your thoughts,

"I love you."

Is what they wrought.

 

You wipe my tears,

And cry your own,

"I love you."

Is what they shone.

 

Mother is strong,

And loving too,

I love you,

Through and through.

Author's Note

Please, please, please, please review. You have reduced me to begging. I really need to know what you think. Be vicious.

Reviews

[Livenrite]

A very sweet poem! Thanks for sharing:)

[Cali]

Why would I be vicious? It's great. Although the "wrought" thing kinda confused me and my small brain mass, everything else is great. Fantastic. She'll love it.