The Key

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Its time we sort this out

You always complain

what you on about?

Im fed up

You're messed up

You're driving me insane

 

Now and then

it seemed for ever

days go by,

were still together

Lately ive be wondering

If its me

That our love has ever bin

The key

to a real future now

 

Reviews

[poetic soul]

this has a nice idea behind it.. it flowed completely well till the second last line...... but the last two lines need a lil revising i guess!!

jus my personal opinion!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Tina Kline]

This poem seems about the confusion that
loving someone can bring about. If I'm wrong
I still very much enjoyed the poem. It was kinda
painful in nature but well written.

Tina