Nobody Knows

A poem about the hardtimes in life. People have to remember that though it may be hard now it will get better. Dont thrive in the shadows of the negatives but get over the obsticals and aim for the positives in life.

Nobody knows the pain I feel
the wounds on my body are painfully real,
but the pain I feel i will not show
because nobody will care, so why should they know.
The cuts on my wrists are red and deep
but the things you have said, cut even deeper,
a simple I'm sorry cannot mend this broken heart
this depressing time will leave a permanent mark.
I'm sorry for the grief i have brought
but now you know you don't own me and i can't be bought,
and the pain I feel I will not show
for nobody will care so why should they know,
nobody will know the pain I feel
and these wounds you have caused they will not heal.
This is real....
This is how I feel.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Shelly Araujo]

I have felt the pain you write about so well. You are right that sometimes sorry just doesn't make a bit of difference. It is comforting to know that we all have pain so that we know we are not alone in our suffering. The good thing is that even permanent marks fade over time. I enjoyed your writing; you did an outstanding job.

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line 7 brocken (broken)
just thought I would be another set of eyes to help fight against the evil typo's :-)

[LivingDeath]

though i wrote it i still like this poem alot, i read it every time im sad :(

[BlondiePink]

i can relate 110% to this to

[nessie]

your amazing=) and so is this poem