Alphabetic Poetry

A poem in alphabetical order. I wanted to challenge myself. Little did I know how hard it was lol.

A breath cut dry escaped,

from gated hell's inside,

just killing like my nights

of painful quiet rage.

Saddened tears 

undo,

vicious worlds 

xystus, 

yearning, 

zen. 

Author's Note

Dont tell me it doesnt flow.. I know that already lol. I was just seeing if I could actually write something poetic alphabetically. Alot harder then I thought it would be, but if anybody is looking for a challenge, here you go. (If you do, send me a link I'd love to read it)

Reviews

[Carrion.]

haha, i didn't get the whole meaning of the word(if its a word) "xystus" until i read the authour's note. I can understand howed that wuld be challenging o.o
great piece btw. i don't think it needs a flow. very deep meaning to it. I love it:D

[donny ingraham]

Short and to the point. Beautiflly written and well expressed

[Blue tailed kite]

Its simply awesome.. to have pulled off an alphabetical poetry so well!!! Good job, enjoyed reading it :)

[AchingAlexandra]

that was beautifully written .
Good job ! (:
And it flows just fine .

[Tainted Devotion]

wow you did a really great job lol. I would like to see someone else pull this off. Just awesome. :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

I would say that you did marvelous penning it from a to z. Loved it.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

Wow, for taking a crack at this, it's really great! The amount of time you put into this challenging piece really shows...wonderful job, every letter was spot-on = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Lilly]

Definetely a challenging theme but I think it's safe to say you made it work. I think it does flow - just in a disjointed way which adds to the piece.
Very creative - I'll keep it in mind and maybe have a go at it some time.
Nice work

[Lily Mae]

I love it and the creativity..xx

[stars are far]

this is so creative, and great ..perfect piece ..