{random words}

behind the wheel subconscious

it is believed

that when you talk

no one will listen

they wont

unless you say something

they want to hear

i conceive

there are those

who let you talk

not to listen

but

in fear of one day

being asked to speak

Reviews

[Kane Hagwood]

The last part of the poem is thought provoking. Many times it feels like people either feel unheard or are terrified of being heard. And it's sadly true that most of the time people only listen to what they want to hear. Humanity always wants to circle back to itself, with our own egos often getting in the way of honestly connecting with other. If we're not open to truly listen, what's the point of speaking? And often when our words are heard, judgement follows, for better or worse. That definitely could scare someone into the submission of silence.

Nice poem, and keep on writing :)

[living lavender]

thank you for your kind words. i appreciate your review.
sometimes i feel i talk to much and wonder if anyone is truly listening. or do they not interrupt because they are afraid to share themselves.
i do not believe people have nothing to say. i believe they either do and/or feel something and do not know how to put either into words.

[Kane Hagwood]

I think that's very true. Everyone has something to say, but they don't always share it. That's kind of how I feel about reviewing other peoples work, really. Over the years of writing, I've learned that MOST who engage with online writing of any kind or a silent majority. People don't know what to say, or they aren't sure how to say it. Or maybe they just don't want to bring attention to themselves. But I've also learned that when we engage with other creatives, it really helps. Not only the people we reach out to, but ourselves also. That's just my take on it. I'm just glad to vocalize my support, and hope to see you keep writing. When I first started writing, sharing my work with other people, it really meant a lot to me when someone would come along and engage with what I was doing. And (most of the time) the feedback was constructive, and helped me a lot.

[living lavender]

i completely understand. as creators, we are our own worst critiques. to the point i talk myself out of sharing with others. i have to continue to tell myself - if it means something to only one person. it was worth sharing. honestly, your support is appreciated more than i can put into words. i believe in constructive criticism. compliments make me nervous. {not in a negative way.} so thank you for your time. encouragement. kindness. and support.

[Rats]

wow this is so true and if your like fine I wont talk if you wont listen it starts all kinds of problems I absolutely love how true this is

[living lavender]

thank you again for stopping by.
reading my words. leaving kindness in your wake.
{much appreciated.}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that makes such sense...fearful that they will be asked to speak....opposite from those who pretend to listen but are really just formulating what they want to say next.
j.

[living lavender]

both sides of the coin. both secretly the same.
{deep down} we all just want to be heard. not judged.
some never speak. in fear of it.
others talk too loud. so they can't hear what others are saying.
{judgement included.}

[Writergurl]

very thought provoking indeed, I found some truth in your words.
Nicely said and written out.

[living lavender]

thank you for stopping by.
i appreciate your words.

[Chris Shaw]

I believe you should always listen carefully, in case you are asked for your opinion. Nice meaningful brevity.

Chris

[living lavender]

i agree.
thank you for your review.

[Blackbird]

Yo, the flow is ill, dawg.

[living lavender]

i appreciate that.
thank you.

[John the Baptist]

If such people exist, they are definitely not in politics.

[living lavender]

politics. the definition of everyone talking at the same time.
no one hearing a word.

only in it for themselves. one. by. one.

[Amani]

people will only listen what they want to hear. but that should not make one go silent.

great poem, thumbs up

[living lavender]

very wise words.
i appreciate your encouragement.
{thank you.}

[Amani]

welcome. anytime

[Serendipity Planet]

I adore your short poems
You have put so much in few words
I am sure your words will be heard well

[living lavender]

thank you for such kind words.
that is the dream.