You're still my one.

Sunrise.

We loved from a young age.

People looked on; told us to take it slow,

But why would I, when I knew you were the one?

 

Blazing noon.

It was our time.

We were flying above the rest of the world, peoples' talk was done,

There was no coming down, when I knew you were the one.

 

A cloud was in the way.

Knowing looks, everybody said 'I knew it would never work.'

I looked in your eyes and I saw the fiery sun,

Nobody's perfect, and I knew you were the one.

 

Sunset.

We loved from a young age.

My face is lined, but we won,

We grew old together,

You're still my one.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Unloved_kitty]

This is a really cute poem ! =]
I really liked it.
Keep it up !
~x~

[Daisy123]

I really liked the repetition you used in this!This is so cute:)

[Awaken the Sleepwalker]

This poem is so beautiful and touching. The beginning portrayed the way I teenager may thing when they first think they have fallen in "love". The next two stanzas showing the ups and the downs, and then the end was so heart felt. I loved it.
Keep up the wonderful work.