Storm The Streets: Reject Parade

It really isn''t very good right now but I have to save the rough rough draft quickly. And I haven't written in ages! So save the critisizm for a few okay?

Let’s storm through the deserted streets.

Make some noise, be far from discreet.

Let’s break some windows start a riot.

Let’s wake up this lazy city, so quiet.

 

Banners & streamers of black & red.

Come join the parade of the living dead.

Let’s rock the world with a party of rejects.

Lose ourselves & find ourselves in a revolution project.

 

Come on come outside we’ve got what you need

Let’s cut open old wounds & let the past bleed

Soak ourselves in blood & let broken hearts heal

Come join the parade, let discretion go & feel!

 

Scream it from the rooftops scream it in the road

We’re taking back our identities we’re taking back control.

Parents, teachers, government, well you can kiss my a*s.

We’ll make your heads explode, judgment implode & do it all with class!

 

We’re gonna tramp through this city

A black mob growing, not so pretty

It’s our own publicized freak-show

We’re planting the seed of rebellion, watch it grow!

 

Reviews

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

LOVE IT.
Even as a rough draft, this is an amazing and raw, emotional piece of work. It is full of hope and rebellion and so many things that are impossible to describe, such an inspritational poem. It feels so carefree and like all you need to do is read it and you can feel all of the thought and passion that went into writing it. This is going straight to my list of favourites : ) Thank you for sharing it!

[Damien Dsoul]

Now here's a guy who's got nothing to lose: from the fiery might and anger tone of his words, I find that unmistakably true. Times such as this, I wish I were back home listening to the Rolling Stones' 'Street Fighting Man."

[KristaK]

I liked it. The way you wrote it kind of like rebellious and free, like this is all you wanted to do. It's an amazing poem, and if this is the rough draft then I can't wait to read the final!

[Summers Under The Old O..]

I think this is really good! It reminds me of The Black Parade. I love the whole rebellious tone of the poem. If this is a "rough rough draft", then the final copy will be amazing. Awesome job, I love it. =]

Summer