The Dark Poem.

Steal in the Night
Stab the Darkness
Put those to Rest
Return to the Light
The Light will go on unless you choose to stay in the dark

Author's Note

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Reviews

[nono]

Advice? Advice from someone whose been on this website for 6 months and improved a lot? You don't have to explain your poem at the end. Just, put it in the author's note. I do it all the time. The part of writing is to leave people thinking. That's what the reader wants. To think about the writing. Keep up the good work. I'll tell you this is much better than any of my very first poems. Just learn to experiment with different kinds of poems, and different forums of writing, and you'll do very well in the writing world. I hope this is of some help to you. Keep up the good work! :D