You Killed Me.

eh....

Walked into the kitchen,
There I found a knife
Decided to stop,
Dying inside
Started to cut
Began to bleed from my veins
Stopped thinking ‘bout you
Took away all my pain
Why did you hurt me?
It was you not the knife
You broke my heart
I lost my life

Author's Note

so... review.

Reviews

[nono]

Another tip of advice. You can send out read request to friends. Don't send so many at once, because it get's on peoples nerves. Also in the author's note...Try not to ask for a review, because frankly for some reason people don't like it or they think it's rude. I don't see the problem, but that's just me. Now, this poem is impressive, such little detail, but it gives a person a vivid idea, and the description you give is powerful. I love it. Dark poems, they say a lot, and they have this power among them that makes a person think. They're very interesting, I say, your work seems much, much better than my own. Also, watch grammar, people find that irritating I personally don't care. But this is good. Gave me something to think about, and has a lot of emotion. Nice work!