Suicidal Rainfall

The darkness is blinding.
The air is cold.
Your finger on the trigger.
You just can't pull.
You've been wanting to do this.
For quite awhile.
Now is your chance.
So,make it worthwhile.
Go ahead.
Just do it.
Pull the trigger.
Tap, tap,tap.
The sound of the rain.
Now coming down so furiously.
Your hands,
Now trembling.
You put the gun to your head.
Click, click, boom.
Now you're dead.

Reviews

[Jaiden]

I really like this, it gave me the chills because it reminds me of myself.

[nono]

Very impressive keep up the good work. I remember when I wrote like this, then we moved and things got better. Nice job. Keep up the good work!