White Wolf's Honour

I Love the wolves so wild and free,
born under the stars,hidden among forest trees,
they have Great Honour in the chain of Life,
guiding my spirit in my time of strife,
deep in my dreams they have spoken truth,
as time began,I've seen them in youth,
within this fog surrounding my mind,
the White Wolf Spoke Honest and Kind,
Tell humanity, they do us great harm,
with factories of  war,not working the farm,
polluting our land with greed and hate,
it all must stop,before it's too late...
Michael"LonelySoul"

Author's Note

sorry...I had to edit the first one,slightly,sometimes things get lost in the translation

Reviews

[LonelySoul]

how about "Hidden Amid the trees?...I think I'll edit this...Thanx for bringing this to my attentions...lol,
and thanx for the Giggles my friend!!!

[Sara May Prideaux]

Aww, thats such a cute poem. Sad, but cute ^^.
What about instaed of "Hidden in tree's" you put hidden in Leaves? It sounds great the way you wrote it, but hiddin in leaves just makes more sence then trees. Only because Ive never seen a wolf in a tree before XD