Somber

I made this back when I was afraid of the dark.

Nothing is to be seen,

But the end of twilight,

Crunching into a ball,

Praying for my forsaken sunlight.

But why am I afraid,

Shaking in fear and apprehension?

"Darkness offers nothing but a shade"

Reminding myself to cure my tension

Then comes tomorrow,

My fear is forgotten for now,

Shrouded under this daylight, birds adorning,

Singing their theme - "Good morning!"

Reviews

[Kyline Freed]

I loved the use of words in this, normally people tend to use really simple words. Great job!

[lonely zephyr]

thank you :)!

[micky]

I think that people aren't afraid of darkness just of what could happen in the dark:) I really enjoyed this piece I almost felt afraid:0 Lol:]

[lonely zephyr]

Yeah it's mostly because we can't see anything so our minds take over and scare us haha