F**k you

F**k you

A Poem by Gabby

My body kills
My mind is weak
My heart filled with hatred
Yet filled with love to you
How can this be?
My darling, I have no clue
I f*****g hate the words you sputter out
The way it cuts like a knife
Corrupting every organ in me
I would kill for you my love
Even die
You don't understand that I try
I try so hard
Just to be yours
Yet you try so hard, just to score
F**k you and your bullshit
F**k you, you make me sick
I love you and your eyes
I f*****g love you and your lies
These mixed feelings are fucked and useless
They are leaving me clueless
I can't find a way to get out
Out of this trap you caged me in 
Out of this love and hate relationship
F**k you, and that smile
F**k you, for leaving me dying
F**k you, f**k you
Too damn bad I love you

© 2013 Gabby


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Out of the some 6,000+ comments I have probably writ to this site thus far, this may be the second time I leave a link in the comment, but I'm listening to this song after reading about you writing about your guy, and temporarily wishing to take the place of him. lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rc4eYOhNnU8

I think your poem is romantic. Is that weird?! I Love f*****g and F**k You. It's takes talent and guts to write it and write it WELL. Hence, the reason for the link. : ) There is no rage here, for me, in this poem. It's raw and passionate. This is where angry sex might get confused with "passionate" sex. : ) I DO like seeing a poem like this written in a red text, but even trying to see the thin text made it a little tough for my Captain Morgan sauce in me!! lol Great job, Gabby.... xoxox -Mark





Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Out of the some 6,000+ comments I have probably writ to this site thus far, this may be the second time I leave a link in the comment, but I'm listening to this song after reading about you writing about your guy, and temporarily wishing to take the place of him. lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rc4eYOhNnU8

I think your poem is romantic. Is that weird?! I Love f*****g and F**k You. It's takes talent and guts to write it and write it WELL. Hence, the reason for the link. : ) There is no rage here, for me, in this poem. It's raw and passionate. This is where angry sex might get confused with "passionate" sex. : ) I DO like seeing a poem like this written in a red text, but even trying to see the thin text made it a little tough for my Captain Morgan sauce in me!! lol Great job, Gabby.... xoxox -Mark





Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

My thoughts exactly.
So much emotion..rage.. in this.
I love it

Jordan.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such raw, and true emotion. Love hurts so much and doesnt always love you back. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 30, 2013
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Gabby

Apple Valley, MN



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