What Words Cannot Explain

She is my definition of beauty.

Her beauty radiating,
a touch of a blissful smile on her face,
my Heart skips a beat,
In deep thought,
I explain it as, marvelous beauty,
but I know it's much more,
Her soothing words and delicate eyes,
Infusing my heart with guilt for knowing I will never be good enough for her,
She is pure joy,
The true light of my life,
The best thing that has happened to me,
I have no clue of what I would do without her.

Author's Note

I was looking to give this to my girlfriend as part of her gift but I want it to be perfect, so please tell me if there is anything I can change to better this poem. :) thank you!!

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

This is truly beautiful and i could not imagine any girlie not wanting to read these words or have them spoken to her!! So romantic...it think you girlfriend will love it!! :)

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for stopping by :)

[flickering candle]

its so perfect. so much pure heart emotion and love. it's raw and pure and beautiful. Amazing :)

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review! :)

[ANTO]

I really like this -
"Infusing my heart with guilt for knowing I will never be good enough for her..." - it captures that feeling so well ;that confusion when you sit and think - "what the heck does she see in me?" And it leads to floods of guilt, yes I agree but also floods of gratitude for having them in our lives.
Well penned LoneWolf.

oh, If I had one criticism it would be to try to avoid clichés.

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review!!! I will try and avoid clichés on my new writings. Thank you for the constructive review. :)

[WolfyZara]

It's amazing!!! I'm kinda jealous

[lonewolf225]

LOL, thank you I hope she'll like it :)

[ShadowsIntoLight]

This is amazing! It's so deep! Keep up the good work!!

[lonewolf225]

Thank you for the review!

[Freesearch 101]

Go for it brother. It's perfect because it's heartfelt. She will love it. I've done something similar in the past!!!

[lonewolf225]

Thank you!!!