Song of a Bird

The sand seems to like my toes,

 while i walked the ocean began to rose.

 It sang a song as I heard,

 it sang the song of a bird.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Short and sweet, and you have chosen simple words to create the imagery... I love the rhyming too... Seems like a scenery of a seashore where a bird is singing in her own sweet melodious voice... Very well done...

Note: did you mean 'my' in the first line instead of 'me'? I think it will make the line more beautiful...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Lilith]

oh yea i meant my xD but thank u so much!

[Esther]

Beautiful poem, Lilith :)