You

You are my world

I look into your eyes and I see my future, 

a future with an amazing man, 

the first man to ever make me understand what it was like to feel loved. 

I see your smile and my heart skips a beat, 

the words you speak are like music to my ears. 

I feel so safe when your arms are around me. 

You hold my heart in your hands.

Author's Note

I've never posted my writing publicly.....really looking for advice and trying to learn to become a better writer

Reviews

[z.chéri]

So simple yet very effective! All i would say is the use of punctuation, use more full stops to create a more dramatic effect on people's emotions! Other than that, you're doing well!
Also i have a poetry competition that i would love for you to enter! It ends in a couple days so i hope to see a submission from you! Keep writing! :)

[Emily]

Thank you, How would I enter your poetry competition?

[z.chéri]

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/POETRY-%21/54629/

Here is a link :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful- what a wonderful place to have your heart held in that specials mans hands🌹

[Ms Paragon]

Simple and sincere. Well done!

[sette]

the flow of emotion is there that of a love shared by two, i like the style simple but complete in thought and depth