frozen sight

wrote it for my wife

ny love for you is a rose pedal frozen in fall. nothing can compete to the deep extreme I feel for you. the environment surcomes to this moment in time. this is the

chosen temperature so there are mirrors every where. so every moment is

a gaze at your beauty, like the rose pedal frozen in fall I know no one else will catch my eye.   

Author's Note

pardon the spelling please.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A rose petal frozen in the fall...That is nice and well written.