GAH I LOVE IT. I love the way the lines go together and the way they rhyme. It's flowy, and I like flowy things. and the melting snow makes me remember that it is WINTER. WHICH MEANS IT IS COLD. ME NO LIKE COLD. but me DO like this poem. ;3 lalala. i like how poetic the last stanza is. and i like the word "distraught" as well. xD i like a lot of the words you use. LALALALALALALAL. i love the "l" stanza [yes i am calling it that like a boss] the "i cannot tell for what is real, etc., etc.". ♥
The Human mind, a device capable of amazing things, also one capable of strange malfunction, all different yet oddly similar. This is where you can find mine, your personal gateway into the workings o.. more..