Raw emotion

Writing on a leaf,
A letter with some grief,
Wind blows it away...

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

So beautiful. I like it. :-)

Kaze~ :-D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! Very beautiful....... And so meaningful..... It blew me away! Good job!

[Penny]

Tenkw sami.. 4 adding a new dimension 2 d meaning of dis poem. Thnx

[Sami Khalil]

We can blow our successes or wealth away as the wind blows the leaves. Bravo

[Tassawwur]

Good attempt.Keep writing.

[Penny]

Thnx a lot avinash. Indeed emotions can rarely be expressed beautifully in raw form but thats just a force that drives poets to write, isn't it..

[Avinash]

There could be multiple interpretation but I would rather delve into the visual beauty of this short piece.
Sometimes our raw emotions wont ripe enough to be shared by others when they are strongly felt. But yes they can be preserved until they are ready to be expressed in a way world can understand and that needs time and patience.

[Penny]

Tenkew gifty! Becoz of u nw i'm a little less hesitant.

[Gifty]

aah! a fine attempt though your haiku can be expressed in a single breath adding to its charm

[Penny]

Its my first attempt to write a haiku. Fingers crossed