Sestet for depressed

I wrote it when times were hard.

Why the air feels so dry,
Why I always want to cry.
You will succeed when you will try,
But why in trying I am so shy.
My dreams say I'll fly up high,
But will that make me reach the sky??

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

You will reach the sky penny you will not be sad forever.A very moving poem keep writing:)

[Penny]

Tenkew vidya. It is hard sometimes to believe that I'll ever be happy but I am advancing towards the sky by, I hope, improving my writing skills.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and you are doing fine:D

[Penny]

Thnx for showing concern sami, but things r already better. Still its nt bad 2 luk at hard times for inspiration..

[Sami Khalil]

I hope things get better . We all go through depresions so don't feel bad...A wonderful poem...:)........................

[Penny]

Thnx marie, i know it looks forced becoz i ws just to sad at dat tym 2 arrange my thoughts, i hope u see more finishing in my later works

[Marie]

You have an interesting rhyming scheme, though it feels a bit forced.