Relations

I wrote this poem today only.

The warmth of a mother's lap,
Drinking memoties, the juicy sap.
These start and stop our heart's vibrations,
That is why, we call them relations.

Bunking classes with your friends,
Or crying when the college ends.
We miss these friendly radiations,
Dwell in our minds, such relations.

And the ones of we dream oft,
Love of our lives and kisses soft.
Voyager of endless imaginations,
Makes us these, naughty relations.

Sitting with your pet on the floor,
And playing with him when you get bored.
To our unheard pains, these our destinations,
Silent and selfless relations

The broken ones too form a part,
Ugly shadows, on our hearts they cast.
Are precursor of sad creations,
Even the worthless broken relations.

Author's Note

Imperfect? Because U wrote in just half an hour. I was given the title and told to write. How is it??

Reviews

[Bowers]

I love how you brought each stanza to the relations, you have a wonderful ways of words, seriously, I love this poem!

"The broken ones too form a part,
Ugly shadows, on our hearts they cast."

these lines really made an impact, such great words, full of emotion!

Great write!

[Penny]

Thanks a lot. Even a crescent is as beautiful as full moon, doesn't matter if two lines made sn impact or two stanzas as long as my piece is well liked. Thanks again.

[Bowers]

your welcome! :)

[junaid altaf]

u have really managed to put all the aspects in rythm and rhyme and that too in a beautiful manner....

[Penny]

Tenkew junaid and i really did try to do my best during those moments of spontanity. Glad you liked it

[junaid altaf]

your welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"The broken ones too form a part,
Ugly shadows, on our hearts they cast.
Are precursor of sad creations,
Even the worthless broken relations."

I like the poem on relations. The ending was wonderful...:).............

[Penny]

Tenkew sami. Glad you liked it. Pray i win the contest.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................