Monsoon

Reflection of my present situation

Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains..

Author's Note

Another haiku

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

''I LIKE TO CRY IN RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS'' - I FOUND THIS HAIKU INTERESTING EVEN IF IT IS OF ONLY 3 LINES... SOMETIMES YOU DONT NEED TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS BRIEFLY, A SINGLE SENTENCE CAN DESCRIBE THE WHOLE SITUATION...
VERY GOOD HAIKU,,
LOVED IT...

[Penny]

Thanks a lot friend. Really a heartfelt review and praise. I'll cherish it for long.

P.S. you used the word 'briefly' incorrectly in your review

[Anindita Janhabee]

ITS BEEN A PLEASURE.... YEAH IT SHOULD BE 'IN BRIEF'... THANKS FOR THE RPLY..

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best Penny...Bravo...............

[Penny]

Really! I feel honoured

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome.
Short and meaningful.

[Penny]

Grazie mille..

[Sami Khalil]

:)...........

[Hannah Ellsworth]

I really like this, very effective! Great impact in a limited space. :)

[Penny]

My purpose of wriying this poem is solved. Thanks for the review.

[Hannah Ellsworth]

Yay! No problem!

[Saddam]

A beautiful comparison but have totally different meaning. Me also realise some tear in my eyes when rain come. Great one Sir.....

[Penny]

Everyone who is human and loves rain cries when heaven open up, just that some shed tears of joy others of sorrow. Thanks for the review friend.