Ab Kisko Aawaz De (in Hindi)

An ASAP piece, just got the idea and penned it down

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo dekhle piche mud ke
Saanse chalti hain abbhi
Ya marr Gaye hum ghut ghutke

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo rok le in ashqon ko
Ya kehde ek baar hi
Jee bhar ke rolo ab toh

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Jo baat Kare humse bhi
Ya padhkar bass khamoshi
Jazbaat padhe mere bhi

Ab kisko awaaz de,
Koi thehre toh pal bhar ko
Jo thamle baahon mein apni
Aur kabhi na chhode humko..

Author's Note

Yeh toh shuruyat, koi bhi sujhav, mashvira Jo aapke mutabiq iss nazm KO behtar baba sakta hai, zarur dijiye..

Reviews

[Suditi]

"Ya kehde ek baar hi
Jee bhar ke rolo ab toh "
My favourite lines from the poem.

A very heart touching piece :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i have that same feeling, quite often..............
beautifully written......
reminds me of the song: mud kar kise dekhta hai mere dil, tera kaun hai jo aawaz dega"
i loved it!!!
:)

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya.. Kaisa ittefaq hain ke aap bhi isse ittefaq rakhte hain.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

badnaseebi ki tanashahi.............

[M.A.Rathore]

What a lovely poem in Hindi! It's so vibrating in deep emotions. I just love the style and feelings expressed.
The question remains there "Ab kisko Awaj den... "
So beautiful piece!

[Penny]

Thanks a lot Rathore ji for this insightful review.. Shukriya.

[sapna sagar]

arey waah! bahut bhaav se shabdo ko piroya hai aapne.......hindi me zarur likhte rahiyega.

[Penny]

Avashya.. Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai.. Bahot shukriya aapka

[Saddam]

Ab hum aap ko kya sila de is pyare se tohfe ka.
Bahut hi khubsurati se piroya hai in alfajon ko.
Mukammil mustakbil hai ye.
Khubsurat, kuch dard hai, jo bahut kush bayan karti hai.

[Sami Khalil]

Waiting for the English version if you ever do...:)...............

[Penny]

Thanks buddy.... It is actually the first draft. I will soon the write a translation too but. Thanks a lot. You do more than what is required..

[Sami Khalil]

You have welcome muchly. ....:)......

[Gaurav Walia]

bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

[Penny]

Bahot bahot shukriya..